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PostSubject: Re:    Sat Jul 11, 2009 9:11 pm

Wow there are a lot of flaws in the track.

1. Bad detail technique. Try Phil38654's or Graggen's detail techniques. Wink
2. Okay-ish flow. Try not using curve tool if you did used it.
3. Bad Ending. Never do that again.

6/10
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PostSubject: Re:    Sun Jul 12, 2009 4:08 am

Strato, I think we are not on the same line. I self find the Detail better then the map. Because I dind't use the curve tool. The detail I worked with z3r0 1234 guide 2 detail. And if you read see you at the comments I did it good, and if you can be friendly on this forum you can rate a 10/10 I do it 2 by yours, if you get a map here.

Don't say you know it better please...
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PostSubject: Re:    Sun Jul 12, 2009 4:09 am

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Last edited by Mvvsproductions on Sun Jul 12, 2009 5:49 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Double posted...)
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PostSubject: Re:    Sun Jul 12, 2009 5:12 am

Stratoforce wrote:
Wow there are a lot of flaws in the track.

1. Bad detail technique. Try Phil38654's or Graggen's detail techniques. Wink
2. Okay-ish flow. Try not using curve tool if you did used it.
3. Bad Ending. Never do that again.

6/10

Wtf
That is an awesome track
I would really like to see some of yours stratoforce and then we'll see whos critising peoples tracks
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PostSubject: Re:    Sun Jul 12, 2009 5:49 am

Sorry 4 double post how I remove that reply?
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PostSubject: Re:    Sun Jul 12, 2009 6:10 am

i don't think stratoforce did anything wrong Smile he is allowed his opinions whether he likes a track or not
anyway, criticism is good because you can improve your track
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